Scholarships으로 영작을 해봤는데 아래처럼하면 문법적으로 문제가 없을지 문의드립니다.
입장
I think scholarships are the most __import__ant thing that a college should invest in
이유
Most of all, Scholarships can motivate college students
배경
When I was a university student, My university gave scholarships to the top 10 students
경과
So I studied more than 12 hours alone almost every day
결과
As a result, I could get good grades in college and I was able to get scholarships
마무리
Therefore, I think scholarships are the most __import__ant thing that a college should invest in
제이크(2023.12.27)
When I was a university student, My university gave scholarships to the top 10 students
- 탑텐의 정의가 애매합니다.
So I studied more than 12 hours alone almost every day
- alone 대신 장소가 더 좋겠습니다.
나머진 좋습니다 :D
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