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part 4 p172 실천문제 강의 일정
강의 일정 문제에서 3번 문제 답변 이렇게 해도 괜찮은지 질문드립니다!
on을 많이 사용하면 문장 전체가 어색해지는지도 궁금합니다ㅠㅠ

There are 2 scheduled courses.
First, You can participate in a course on strength training on intermediate with Maros Louis on Mondays at 5 pm.
Second, there will be a course on another strength training on advanced with Kurt Jenson on Tuesdays at 7 pm.

part 5 p214 실천문제(1,2,3)
실제 모의고사로 풀어봤는데 맞는지 모르겠네요ㅠㅠ 한번만 피드백 부탁드리겠습니당ㅠㅠ
1번
I understand that you are looking for a way to change the dental clinic for children
In that case, why don't we rearrange the furniture?
Also, I think it is a good idea to give them a small gift to toys.
by doing so, we will be able to increase a number of children.

2번
I understand that you have a problem with our new gym because it isn't enough sports equipment.
In that case, why don't we give a 30% discount coupon at other times?
Also, I think it is a good idea to build a business relationship with other branches.
by doing so, we will be able to decrease a number of compliant.

3번
I understand that you are looking for a way to decrease complaint about tourist
In that case, why don't we change some guider?
Also, I think it is a good idea to business relationship to other travel agency
By doing so, we will be able to decrease a number of complaints

감사합니다 제이크 선생님!