선생님, 안녕하세요.
172p.g 문제, 해설지에 있는 추가답변 아이디어로 영작을 했습니다. 혹시 수정할 사항이 있거나 어색한 부분이 있다면, 피드백 부탁드립니다~
입장) I agree that the government should encourage more people to buy electric cars than it currently dose.
이유) Most of all, It is helpful to protect the environment.
예시) There many gasoline and diesel powered cars than electric cars in the past.
So, The air pollution was a serious problem.
But, nowadays, thanks to the government support, hybrid and electric cars are getting increase.
As a result, the air pollution has been getting decrease little by little.
제이크 선생님의 답변(2022.09.29)
예시) There many gasoline and diesel powered cars than electric cars in the past.
- there were
But, nowadays, thanks to the government support, (the number of) hybrid and electric cars are getting increase.
As a result, the air pollution has been getting decrease(decreased) little by little.
나머지는 좋습니다 :D
* 2020 대한민국 고객만족지수 아이엘츠 부문 1위
