두번째는 냉장고다. 이것은 오래되어서 노랗게 변색되었다. 또 다른이유는 충분한 공간이 없어서 많은 음식을 넣을수가 없어서 엄마가 스트레스를 받으셨다. 그래서 엄마는 새걸로 바꿀려고 결심했다. 냉장고사이즈에 관해서 얘기하자면 크면 클수록 좋다.
second was refrigerator. it was old and color has changed to yellowish. Another reason is that my mom was stressed because she couldn't put a lot of food because it didn't have enough space.
when it comes to the size of a refregerator, the bigger the better.
이렇게 적어도 되나요?
그리고 예전부터 우리집에 있었다 = it's been at my house for a long time 이라고 해도 되나요?
송지원 선생님의 답변(2022.11.28)
주신 문장은 아래와 같이 바꿔 볼게요.
The second reason was the refrigerator. It was old and its color has turned yellowish. Another reason is that my mom was stressed because she couldn't put a lot of food in it because it didn't have enough space.
When it comes to the size of a refregerator, the bigger the better.
그리고 it's been at my house for a long time 도 좋지만 we've had it for a long time 이렇게 해주셔도 좋을 것 같습니다 :)
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