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I agree that high schools in my area should include more physical education classes in the curriculum.
Most of all, high school students have to care their health.
When I was a high school student, I had no free time to exercise.
So, my health was not good.
And I got a 10kg of my weight during a year.
As a result, I had to exercise after graduating high school.
Therefore, I agree that high schools in my area should include more physical education classes in the curriculum.
제이크 선생님의 답변(2023.05.24)
And I got a 10kg of my weight during a year.
- in a year (1년 만에)
나머지는 좋습니다 ^^
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