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Q. Some high schools offer classes about life skills such as cooking, finance, or computer skills. Should schools teach classes like these, which are not strictly academic? Why? or why not?
입장 : I think schools should teach classes which are not strictly academic.
이유 : Most of all, Students can use the skills in life.
배경 : When I was in high school, I took a class about computer skills.
경과 1:When I bought my computer, I could assemble my computer alone.
경과 2:Also, I could fix a broken computer easily.
결과 : I could save my money fixing the computer.
제이크 선생님의 답변(2024.03.13)
네! 잘 만드셨습니다. 문법적으로도 큰 문제 없는 답변이에요. 이렇게만 해주세요 :D