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As electrical appliances for households had increased, [the time for housework] had been declined.
It is because that the appliances matched the requirement that each households needed.
For example, washing machine makes clothes clean. Refrigerator makes food fresh and It helps to make a meal simply.
Vaccum cleaner evacuate [most of dust that was on the floor in house.]
But [not all the graph soared.]
In the figures, [Washing machine had decreased in 1960~1980].
And the use of Refrigerator had remained since 1980.
Also[ the number of vaccum cleaner in house after 2000 had not changed.]
It can not deny that electrical appliance made household simple.
시원스쿨 선생님의 답변(2024.04.17)
안녕하세요 회원님, 시원스쿨LAB입니다.
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1) 단복수 확인
2) 시제 일치
3) household와 housework, 그리고 evacuate 뜻 확인
도움이 되셨기를 바라며, 목표하신 점수 꼭 달성하시기를 응원합니다!
감사합니다.
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